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The heart slowly fades.
« Thread Started on Dec 28, 2006, 1:34pm »
A poem i made. Not even really a poem it's just something i wrote, hope you like it.

The hylians, we are the last of them. Having no hope but the light. Lying in eternal darkness, it's like catching a fever... The twilight, is a sickness....The power may feel like something you never had, but it will make you become something...Something you thought could never happen. Your heart falls into darkness.When you thought you could take back the things you did, you begin to realize as the beast falls beneath your heart.

There is no turning back.


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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #1 on Dec 28, 2006, 2:38pm »
Not bad. What else can i say..
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Everyday i fold to thoughts of you my small witch
You left my world and left me alone in the unknown
I've lost my way without you, i'm getting nowhere
Great gods of the skies above, return my Midna to me.

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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #2 on Dec 28, 2006, 2:55pm »
Say nothing else. There is no more to say...
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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #3 on Dec 29, 2006, 9:16pm »
Agreed.
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You left my world and left me alone in the unknown
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Great gods of the skies above, return my Midna to me.

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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #4 on Jan 2, 2007, 9:11pm »
Quite nice indeed, why don't you try to write it in verse?
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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #5 on Jan 3, 2007, 6:38pm »
Could work as well.
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You left my world and left me alone in the unknown
I've lost my way without you, i'm getting nowhere
Great gods of the skies above, return my Midna to me.

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« Reply #6 on Jan 6, 2007, 2:31pm »
Could try?
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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #7 on Jan 15, 2007, 5:19am »
Verse would be nice, but it's good the way it is :D
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Re: The heart slowly fades.
« Reply #8 on Aug 12, 2007, 4:57am »
It's pretty good.
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